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Very Great :D

Hey Kippetjetoktok xD

I will write this review in english because of other people who might want to know what i am saying. (since that is quite difficult to follow in dutch ;)

The animation is realy cool, and the effects weren't to bad.
Here are some hints you could use.

1.
Use a higher FPS. like 16 or maybe even 20.
It will make your animation much smoother and a must for the eyes.
However, it will take more time and accurate animatimg.

2.
Bring more variations in the sound effects you have.
Use more sounds than only kick and punch noises,
Since you use RPG maker 2003, (did i recommend that to you ?)
You could use many more sounds in your submission.

3.
Do not fear the NG size limit for Flash Submissions.
You have for about 10 mb + for a submission.
I know you fear for it. (since you've told me that xD).

Nevertheless this submission is realy realy good for a first attempt.
At least, ,, its better than mine, which got bl*mmed by zero bombers.
Dont let them ruin your score. (yes i know its difficult to resist :P ).
Atleast my vote will compensate it a bit for you.
there you go.

1.72 / 5.00 (+ 0.048) 5/5 10/10 Favorited.

take care,
FlashBlack
P.S My second account in here is : St0rmChaser

kippetjetoktok responds:

2.
I looked for other nice punch/kick sounds on rpg2003, but the other ones were crappy. And you did recommend rpg maker to me :P.

3.
hehe :P

thanks for comment ;)

hmz, pretty nice

Yea, i guess this is okay xD
the artwork is not so interesting, but im realy impressed about the storyline.
you made a real new story out of it.

but the graphical animation can be better.
also the voices can be more bright to.

greetz FlashBlack

here's a 7.

KHF responds:

Yeah, these are things that have been brought up before. Animation wise, I know I could do better, but if you compare it to episode 1 you can see a big improvement. :)

Audio wise... that problem should be fixed by episode 8 (and possibly towards the end of part 2), because Starrunner (the guy who does the voice of Ratchet) has resently introduced me to a better recording program.

But thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

DUde this sucked..

This was one of the most horrifying flash submissions i ever saw.
only the background animation was "decent".
the other aspects were just piece of crap.

I dont get your "goal" either. what did you want to do.
annoy us with a very bad movie ?

or did you realy tried your best to make a great movie,
in that case, try to make it a bit longer, and try to spend some more frames on the text in the game. and give them a bright color.

i cant give you more than a 3.
i wil vote a 2/5. if i weren't the first reviewer, i would have give you a 1/5,

greetz FlashBlack

Grumio responds:

No, it's not. I would rather have something (somewhat) well-drawn such as this over something like a 12 FPS stick figure doing some asinine task.

Yes, you are a genius sir.

Does it really look like it...

Then don't. Someone who gets the point that the name "random7", and let me say that again, "RANDOM7" is supposed to be something totally RANDOM will.

LOL

++Pretty funny and creative xD
++the clay animation was pretty smooth !.
++The Background music was great.
+The voices were clear. (atlease not undescribable)
in short : HERE'S A 7 :)

Way to go m8 !!!!

BlakTornado responds:

Thanks a lot, man :D

what the crap ?! xD

um, i dont know where that was all about.
i guess it was for your good friend yesse, xD next time, change the title in : random stuff or something. and not in happy birthday yesse, cause only 5 % of the movie was meant to that title ^^.

anyway, the drawing was very good, so was the sound of your movie.
so you wil receive a high rating anyway ^^

a 7.

and concratulate yesse for me xD

greetz FlashBlack

Lochie responds:

IT'S 'JESSE' NOT 'YESSE'!
But thanks anyway.

Jesse liked the animation, so it's a tribute to him.

A 7..?

Congratulate*
Jesse*

Thanks for the review.
~Lochie.

this wasn't that bad !

Its not good, but its not bad either.

Its almost 10 mb of sprites and presets.
Its a nice collection, and you gave them a good part in your movie, but i dont get the story. next time, try to make a good storyline in your movie. you have enough sprites to make one.

you realy have potential. i wil give you a 6 because of the lack in storyline.
animation(sprites) music, and interaction is acceptable.

greetz FlashBlack

Greenkupo responds:

i have it in my mind THX

Funny xD

LoL ! that was nice.
a lot of humor with one single joke !!. very nice job over there.

and i LOVE your preloader.

the movie + animation itself was not so very good,
because you just made a small drawing, and shaked it a bit.

the music, and sounds were good also !!!!.
so i give you a LOT of points for the music, and your preloader + humor,
unfortunately your movie itself kinda sucked.
but because of your other good aspects, i will give you a nice score.
so it wil be a : 7

have fun, and NEVER give up.

greetz FlashBlack

Wampo responds:

thanks :D
yeah the preloader took longer time than the movie itself :D
and the sounds were all out of my mouth lol.

hmmm ? ...

i never saw this kind of movie.

however, i enjoyed watching ^^.
its kinda short, and that's to bad.
and you didn't used so much radiation/blur/shape effects.
when you make these things, i think you should improve the graphics a bit ^^.
but a very nice job over here ^^.
especially for your first time.

i wil give you a 7 ^^.

and don't forget : never give up.

Fiskmannen responds:

Thanks! :D

This was good :)

I liked the animation style.
And the explaination was very good also.
Was that your voice ?.

I never knew anything about volcanoes.
Now i do heh.

(srry for the short review, but i had to go.)

Keep on goin like this !!.

IceDragon64 responds:

Thank you for reviewing. Dont worry if its not long, I have been told all the basics now anyway. Glad you liked it. Yes its my voice (with a cold). Its my voice in DS Dragon quiz for some of the answers too, mine in the DS Christmas Quiz song at the end and mine in toothy lip sync alpha, speeded up! I will keep going. BOI 2 -someday if I get support.

Wonderfull :D (i got 2 questions)

That was just awesome !.
These graphics where a must for the eyes.

But i got 2 questions for you :
Did you made it frame by frame ? (if no, please tell me how you did it else)

second question :

Was this your first flash experience ? (since it was your first new-grounds submission)

Please answer me the questions :).

Great job, keep on goin !

Ryanide responds:

Yes, I did make the majority of it frame by frame. It runs at 25 fps. It was painstaking work, but I'm happy with the outcome.

And it's not my first flash experience. The ones I made before are too horrible to put here XD. This is the first GOOD one I've ever made.

Hobby level "home-grown" Producer. Hoping to reach a professional level within my still severely limited lifespan. Posting tracks on newgrounds when idk wtf to add (WiP's). Will occasionally post complete tracks. Have a listen and enjoy :D. Greets Potenc

Tristan Weber @FlashBlack

Age 31, Male

Producer&Programmer

Saxion (University)

The Netherlands

Joined on 8/27/06

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